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Posted 03 November 2009 - 09:32 AM

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One life I'm gonna live it up
I'm takin' flight said I'll never get enough.
Stand tall I'm young and kinda proud
I'm on top as long as the music's loud.
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Posted 03 November 2009 - 01:45 PM

The only complaint I have is that the BG is a little monotone.
Maybe put some more color into and/or detail.
Other than that, the sig came out nicely.
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Posted 03 November 2009 - 04:18 PM

I see an issue with the light source. Your render is already dark on one side and light on the other meaning it had a light source to start. I would recommend removing the extra light source in the bottom left since it has very little reason to be there. Try blending it a bit more as well, otherwise, this is pretty good.
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I’ll always remember the good times in my spine, and the holes I burned in my brain, with this next line.

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Posted 03 November 2009 - 11:45 PM

Awesome, not nearly as bad of complaints as I thought I would get.

I'll try out your suggestion Savior. But Johnny i'm too afraid i'd ruin the sig lol.

This post has been edited by Ominous: 03 November 2009 - 11:46 PM

One life I'm gonna live it up
I'm takin' flight said I'll never get enough.
Stand tall I'm young and kinda proud
I'm on top as long as the music's loud.
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Posted 04 November 2009 - 01:31 AM

I would add a little more yellow, make it a little less monotone, and keeping with the analogous colors.
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