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This post has been edited by Ominous: 09 September 2009 - 03:01 PM
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Posted 05 September 2009 - 09:17 PM
I lighting seems to be all over the place and the blur isn't working. I did like the emphasis on his eyes and mouth though but I think that is just part of the original stock.
I’ll always remember the good times in my spine, and the holes I burned in my brain, with this next line.
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Posted 05 September 2009 - 10:42 PM
Get more of the original showing, don't overcoat the render with effects, let it breathe :) I do like the composition of it though.
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Posted 09 September 2009 - 03:01 PM
Posted another version.
One life I'm gonna live it up
I'm takin' flight said I'll never get enough.
Stand tall I'm young and kinda proud
I'm on top as long as the music's loud.
I'm takin' flight said I'll never get enough.
Stand tall I'm young and kinda proud
I'm on top as long as the music's loud.
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Posted 09 September 2009 - 11:20 PM
I prefer the first one more.
The second one doesn’t have that much dept and BG scheme seems repetitive.
However, I like how you have a little more of the original stock showing on the newest version.
The second one doesn’t have that much dept and BG scheme seems repetitive.
However, I like how you have a little more of the original stock showing on the newest version.
Thanks Thousandsunny for this sig
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